Jan,17,2076- My name is Jason Scott I may only be 15 but I have a very important job. I am one of the 14 teens chosen to settle the final frontier, planet X. Yes the U.S. Government is sending 14 teens, 6 kids, and 30 adults to populate the small planet Omega 7. We are all currently being educated on boring stuff like gravity and pressures but mainly survival techniques like how to clean water. NASA says we should keep a log of everything that happens, kind of like a diary.
Well that’s it for my first entry, time till lift-off aprox. 74 hours and counting.
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What is planet x for?
ReplyDeleteit sounds cool when are you going to finish it
ReplyDeletegood story
ReplyDeleteI hope that don't really happen if it does thats not good :/
ReplyDeleteReally good you should continue it
ReplyDeleteAwesome, sci-fi with a believeable teenage character. So, there is water on planet X? I'm wondering what the environment there on Omega X is like?
ReplyDeleteYes the whole reason they can is that it has water and can support life
Deletegood keep it going add wild animals and violence and stuff
ReplyDeletenice cant wait for the actual story to come out.
ReplyDeleteI like how you looked ahead in the future. And I like how you used "Voice" when you read it. Great job rusty918
ReplyDeleteI wasent trying to sound like anything inparticular
DeleteThey should run into sometype of lifeform on omega 7 and possibly have one of the people lost
ReplyDeleteI like this , It sounds verry interresting .
ReplyDeletehave you ever considered being a real writer? or entering the young writer contest? i'd love to read this whenever you finish. i love how it starts off and your characters voice! goodjob. keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteNo I don't enjoy writing but I'm glad you like it
DeleteIt sounds so intresting but why did you have to stop rite in the beggining?
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