Wednesday, February 15, 2012

The Final Frontier 2nd entrie

Jan,19,2076,Scott- NASA has announced the formation of squads there are many jobs people need to complete like Exploration/Defence, Gathering, hunting , ect. The squads will complete the tasks as they arise but each squad needs a Sergent to command them and settle disputes between one another. The only people they listen to are the Captains, oh yeah the Captains are the leaders of 10 men ( two squads). But anyways the srg. for the exploration squad bailed on us and they need a new Sargent, I pray for whoever they make take that job. I just want to skate by so  I’m just going to be in the defence squad as a lackey or something, that way I can lounge around with a TZ-15 and shoot anything that tries to get by. One day and some change till liftoff.

10 comments:

  1. Cool Story, What is the TZ-15? And what's this time period.? But great story, You need to just make it a whole big story!

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  2. I think that if you get far enough with this.. you might be able to make it into a book and publish it. I would read it!

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  3. good story i like that you continued the old story

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  4. What is a TZ-15 and it sounds really good i like where he says he praysfor whoever is the new srg.

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  5. I wonder what happens next to Scott?

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  6. This is turning out really good so far. i hope you continue to update your blog with these journal entires! I'd like to read more.

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  7. sounds like fun why are thy leaving

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  8. Good call with your decision to continue this. I like how you're doing multiple things in your writing that work well together: your writing this as a journal, moving the story forward while also giving important facts to the reader, and you're also developing the character's personality. This isn't easy.

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  9. I like how your writing in the journal entry type style and i hope you continue to write more of these. (:

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